Please Evaluate My Website

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Mary

Please evaluate my website. The site owner gives me most information
written in the first person and I did my best to translate into the
third person. Rewriting is hard work for me so I am hoping you can be
brutally honest to help me get back onto a professional track. The
site owner has a business of 20 years of suggesting vitamins, herbs
and specialty products to improve the client's health. I can't say
'treat' because she is not a doctor. She has put many clients on a
road to recovery that they never thought possible. I was her client
and thought I had to live with Chronic Bronchitus and other
debalitating painful disorders and now my airways are clear and I am
pain free. If a surfer wants to buy vitamins or specialty products, I
am trying to emphasize that buying from my client is a better choice
because she can make suggestions that a typical retailer can't bases
on her business of treating clients at her office for 20 years.
This is not being conveyed as I would like so I need help. I am
self-taught so I don't have formal training. I also never got around
to images so I need direction on that, too.

Please Evaluate: http://healthyresult.org

Thanks,
Mary
"No one knows everything, but everyone knows something."
 
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Stefan B Rusynko

Good general home page layout,
but IMHO
Too many different fonts / looks, and navigation schemes
(like http://healthyresult.org/xorig_site/marge.htm vs http://healthyresult.org/about/index.htm)

Also quite a few broken links like from http://healthyresult.org/xrevision1/literature.htm to
http://healthyresult.org/marge.htm and http://healthyresult.org/xorig_site/Links Page.htm

PS remove all spaces from file names





| Please evaluate my website. The site owner gives me most information
| written in the first person and I did my best to translate into the
| third person. Rewriting is hard work for me so I am hoping you can be
| brutally honest to help me get back onto a professional track. The
| site owner has a business of 20 years of suggesting vitamins, herbs
| and specialty products to improve the client's health. I can't say
| 'treat' because she is not a doctor. She has put many clients on a
| road to recovery that they never thought possible. I was her client
| and thought I had to live with Chronic Bronchitus and other
| debalitating painful disorders and now my airways are clear and I am
| pain free. If a surfer wants to buy vitamins or specialty products, I
| am trying to emphasize that buying from my client is a better choice
| because she can make suggestions that a typical retailer can't bases
| on her business of treating clients at her office for 20 years.
| This is not being conveyed as I would like so I need help. I am
| self-taught so I don't have formal training. I also never got around
| to images so I need direction on that, too.
|
| Please Evaluate: http://healthyresult.org
|
| Thanks,
| Mary
| "No one knows everything, but everyone knows something."
 
C

Crash Gordon®

I agree with Stefan.

You've got a good beginning, that needs to be tightened up.

I'm not a big fan of pastel colors, but your site almost pulls it off. You need to stick with a palette of colors, be it complimentary, triads, split complimentaries etc. There a lots of webs that deal with this topic.

Some of your pages don't have links Home except from the bottom text links - or if they do they get lost in the busy-ness.

The index page is too busy, too many boxes to read. Cut it down to a few, put some photos on the index page. The text boxes are fine but theres just too much to read, I'd make them more like snippets with "...more" at the bottom - you did this on some but the snippets are still too much to read. You want to intice the reader to read on only if their interested in the topic, but don't force me to stare at all that text :) - Grab my eye on the index page...suck me into the site...make me want to find out more!

The table headings/captions should all be consistant fonts and justified the same way. It's ok to use a different font in the Captions but they should all be uniform. On the same topic, all the emboldened text (I guess they're all links) should be the same color and size, it's confusing using different ones all over the site.

hth,
Robo





| Please evaluate my website. The site owner gives me most information
| written in the first person and I did my best to translate into the
| third person. Rewriting is hard work for me so I am hoping you can be
| brutally honest to help me get back onto a professional track. The
| site owner has a business of 20 years of suggesting vitamins, herbs
| and specialty products to improve the client's health. I can't say
| 'treat' because she is not a doctor. She has put many clients on a
| road to recovery that they never thought possible. I was her client
| and thought I had to live with Chronic Bronchitus and other
| debalitating painful disorders and now my airways are clear and I am
| pain free. If a surfer wants to buy vitamins or specialty products, I
| am trying to emphasize that buying from my client is a better choice
| because she can make suggestions that a typical retailer can't bases
| on her business of treating clients at her office for 20 years.
| This is not being conveyed as I would like so I need help. I am
| self-taught so I don't have formal training. I also never got around
| to images so I need direction on that, too.
|
| Please Evaluate: http://healthyresult.org
|
| Thanks,
| Mary
| "No one knows everything, but everyone knows something."
 
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