JaiLBrEaK said:
The pictures don't appear at all for me. There is one other thing - and it's
down to sheer laziness - is the use of 'text-speak'. I - and I'm sure many
others - absolutely abhor it! It shows that you cannot be bothered to create
properly worded sentences. Keep the shorthand for your mobile.
I suggest you totally rewrite the paragraph on the home page.
Instead of
"Nice 2 c u here, visit me more often
Consider "Thanks for visiting my site. if you like it, I hope you'll come
back again."
I made this site 2 show u what stuff I got. I’m not selling, lending or
publishing them.
Consider "I created this site to showcase my music collection. Please don't
ask for copies - or to borrow - as you will be refused."
If u found some errors or mistakes on this page, please report me.
Suggestions, offers or any other ideas are welcome."
Consider "If there are any errors or mistakes, please click here (hyperlink)
to report them to me (don't say 'report me' because people will think
"report you to whom"?).
The rest of the paragraph is fine.
SMS language has no place on a website (unless you're selling mobile logos
or ringtones).
These are just helpful suggestions - I realise English isn't your first
language, but you should always present yourself in the best way possible
online.
